The Time

Time's something we're always so aware and scared of;we bind ourselves in the time frames and try travelling as per its pace and rules.Time rules us.Challenging time may save us!

You don’t bind me with the pain of ages, years and days,

I’d like to fly by the sky, 

To count the clouds and stay,

Bereft of frustrations and desperations and despair:

Would love to sit back on the peaceful feather and fly,

Bereft of isolated suffocations and tears:

Unveiling my soaring hopes and dreams,

To rise high and touch the sky.

 

I believe to be born every moment,

Rejoicing life and its paces,

Its turns and twists and twirls,

New hopes and dreams reborn too,

The eyes glitter in wonder,

The Cosmo gizmo of the solitude swirls.

 

What are you awaited to?

What are you awaited for?

You can fall in love with one or more...

The sky can change its attire,

The sea can blush in red,

The moon can eat its own half,

A new bud can take its bloom,

The butterfly can peek and seek for a new rose....

Even a prostitute can get her new home!

 

The time is relative by its means,

It’s just that we pass by and count,

We are scared and feared to be bound,

We want to stop the hands of the clock going round.

Will that stop everything and eternalise all?

Will that make a stroll of corpse, killing the poisoned world?

Will you be able to what you want to let happen?

Will you not still try to breath and be alive?

 

We try ... we try to make the things fall in place.

We try to put the end of all in grace.

The time it fetches and moves by the scornful beats,

We count till we leap and our heart beats.

Reviews

[Otsana]

Another great poem with lots of meaning.
My favourite lines are;

"I believe to be born every moment,
Rejoicing life and its paces,
Its turns and twists and twirls,
New hopes and dreams reborn too"

I think that if you can life with this outlook on life then you are very lucky...but so many of us either take time for granted or worry that we don't have enough, instead of just enjoying each moment for what it is. Nice write.

[MOON]

Time , what we do with it . Beautifully penned and so many breath taking lines.

[Coyote Poetry]

"What are you awaited to?
What are you awaited for?
You can fall in love with one or more..."
I like the many strong statements in this poem. You questions many things and open the door to many good questions. I enjoyed the complete poem. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Jordan's Back]

Great Deep and profound!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

I believe to be born every moment,
Rejoicing life and its paces,
Its turns and twists and twirls,
New hopes and dreams reborn too,
The eyes glitter in wonder,
The Cosmo gizmo of the solitude swirls
......................wonderful, lovely piece. Great write. With regards.

[Abd-afeez]

I love this it is indeed vast in coverage, the fact that you highlight the needless human adventures and their annoying lust for changes. Even though it might be too late for such changes and so they'll want to turn back the hands of time. I believe you've been so thoughtful and now you've initiated me because right now i need to sit down and see if am really using my time right because its ticking on and can never be reversed. Thank you for this wonderful piece.

[AK]

That was great! Very well written and thought over.

[Amila Jay]

Absolutely, every second we are something new, we aren't told how we going to spend the next second, what we will hear, who will come, what we will lose...and we of course can't stop time, time stops us, like this write alot, excellent:-)