Breaking through the Society

when the society acts like a thorn and doest not let you stay alive

They take you away,

They snatch you away,

They break you off from me--

Because they decided I shouldn’t have the right to be.

 

So they force you away,

They cut you away,

They break you off from me--

Because they decide that they will decide,

And I must not have you with me.

 

You’re swallowed by their decisions,

You sulk and gasp through ,

You die to get back me to you,

Seems you are locked unnaturally too,

 

We get frustrated, we were suffocated

To take a li’l of the air

The wearing weakness tie us up

Strength of mind makes it fair

 

The despicable society

and its unreal truths

Make it gross enough

Despoiled by the group of Brutes.

 

We fled from our brain and body

We fled from our being

We lived together ever, forever

With our mind and soul thing.

 

The heart remains thereafter,

The soul remains too,

Who will put the iron bars in between?

We are already glued.

 

The cupid reposes within us

And the angel of love and faith,

We promise to stay together like this,

Immortal till death.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great energy in this poem. I like the purpose and the emotion in your words.
"We get frustrated, we were suffocated
To take a li’l of the air
The wearing weakness tie us up
Strength of mind makes it fair"
No weakness in this poem. I like the ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lina Grey]

Such a strong piece. It's full of bittersweet emotions and confident truth. Thank you.

[AK]

Awesome poem!