Love being Eternalised

The moment of love, if at all, were possible to be bottled up forever and be eternalised ...then...

The room was dim,

Dark and moist,

Hot and humid,

You smelled so fresh, from your chest,

As you held me tight and pressed my neck,

And kissed my lips and breasts...

Droplets of sweat adored my globes,

My chin, my chest, my arms and waist,

I kept my eyes closed (and),

Relished and cherished

Your kiss, your tongue,

Your lips, your mouth, your sips.

Only a thin line of sunray came through,

Touched my body, my curves and cleav,

Focused on our heart beat rates,

As we got more deep in dip,

Addicted, intoxicated, infused and gripped--

You stabbed me untold, but loved forever,

So soon and sudden, not so clever,

But you knew why, the reasons behind,

We suffered so much, that ate and twirled,

We cried, we broke, we wanted to be alive,

"Love is crime"--is that what says the Life?

You cut your veins, and bled them shower,

You fell and faint, and paint the floors,

My corpse, my gown, our hearts to the core,

I stared at you, with my eyeballs still

Fixed and froze scared in disbelief,

I screamed so hard with pain to relief,

Nobody could hear, nobody would ever,

The empty silence prevailed forever.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Such emotion and tenderness in the poem. Love lead us to pleasure and pain. I like the story in this poem. Led the reader into the desire and need of love. A strong and surprise ending to the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[AK]

That was so sweet and well written

[Otsana]

There are a lot of powerful and intense emotions in this poem and I think you have done a great job as always. :)

[Chrissy]

Super job on it. I liked it a lot.