Relationships Redefined

Relationships : the most complicated subject on the earth with its own elasticity and tug of war...just tried to put in words in my own way!

Relationships are undefined yet,

Complicated and humiliated,

Sometimes fascinated too,

Not so easy and charming,

Like in castes of birds and animals,

Or in flowers and fruits do.

The society funds and sponsors,

With mobs and sobs,

Sometimes without even hopes,

The relation tends to low,

With failures and sorrows,

And finally causing mere chokes.

Even then we learn to accept,

Leave ourselves and live in it,

With ups and downs every moment,

With untold stories, histories and mysteries,

Kept unspoken forever and ever,

Stitched and canned a bonnet.

 

 

When lips meet lust, souls kept away,

In painful pleasure, and moaning groans,

The sip of tongues, makes more creep,

Deep in wonder, as if relationship shone.

The ship of wrecked wretched and vigour

Broke and tore amidst the silence

Empty darkness swallowed forever

Failed, still testing the taste of patience.

 

 

Mother and her would be,

Still in the swell womb,

Being kicked makes her feel happy,

Pampered and pomp.

Happiness, heartiness, cried in laughter,

Counting seconds, days and events,

Desperate to see her hopes come true,

Resting, weaving nostalgic moments.

The purest of pure, the priceless of all,

From under the sea, finding the pearl,

The dreams so near, close and loving,

Moments to come true, eagerly waiting,

The innocent of all, the nature too recall,

The motherhood in flora, fauna and all.

 

It does not end, the room is still left,

If you want, you can ponder,

The rest to be rendered,

The manicure of the society,

Diversifies reality,

Relationship worthy,

Is it really?... I wonder.

 

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

the font size darling...makes it impossible to concentrate...a request to increase it...as for the write it was a question...are relationships worthy? really? however I opt to differ in some cases...not all bonds are painful...but yes most are...and the way you defined the sweetness of motherhood, I was swept away in its purity...this was one of your best works sis...keep writing!

[Amila Jay]

Something to think about here, love the write, Excellent poem:)

[AK]

That was really nice! Your view about relationships is clearly shown. That was a beautiful write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Some questions are answer by living and a lot of luck. Sometime we need both. I tell people. Slow and easy. Never know what you will get if you rush into something unknown. Last question in the poem is a good one. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

As said Anisha your poem is very worthy and best work. With regards.

[Dayran]

There are moments when we will beg, plead and kneel for that which we know we can't live without. Then there are times when we live without doing any of it. Which is when, how, why, where is something we decide when we are ready. Good write!

[Jordan's Back]

This is really a wonderful poem and so wonderfully written....
Its also very true. Great Job!

[Abd-afeez]

I love this as that its about the most complicated thing on earth; a relationship. I wonder were your inspiration came from but no matter what and where that is, it is one hell of a thruster. I so much love the way you masterly weave so much words to beautifully illustrate the affairs our togetherness brings, meaning soul to soul, nature to soul, nature to nature, a somewhat awesome one where everything interact. After painting the picture of their beauty and ugliness, i so much how you ended it. You knew you've taken us through a vast journey and that we'd have seen diversities in relationships and would have wondered if they are worth it. Wonderful write really. Thanks so much, you rock awesome!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

It would have been great if you could have just increased the size of the words...... Its hard to concentrate..... Rest assured, everything is good!
The second stanza was the best...