My First Kiss : so memorable

whatever first in the life has its own significance and importance. And so was my first kiss...

I don’t remember the day and the month,

The year, the hour, the time or moment,

I just remember I closed my eyes,

As you touched your lips hard, to suffice,

On my lips as they frowned and trembled,

And you hold my head and fumbled.

I closed my eyes, I sensed your breath,

I sensed your beard, and the kiss that you did,

I was in love, and in much pleasure,

To kiss you along ever and forever,

The Paradise of love, we’re closer than ever,

I held you so tight, don’t leave me; never!

The kiss and its bliss was magical to wonder,

I was in your arms, you kissed me so tender.

The season seemed to move for a decade,

Or even a century to wear out a facade,

We never knew how long and what,

If we were even alive, dead or not.

Our souls met, hearts too, together so close,

The  kiss we would never forget, the bonding knows.

The first kiss, lovely always, eternal and devout,

Framed with so much of care, as a silhouette.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This piece was beautiful. I can relate to this piece as well. It is really cute. You will always remember your first kiss. If you love the person that much. I really enjoy this. Thanks for sharing.

[† Allybear!!! &d..]

omygosh!!!! This was beautiful!!!!!!

[stars are far]

This is so sweet ....
great work ....:)

[Boldpen]

Sugary Piece... loved it!
The words were brilliantly spun with love....
Nicely done!

[i-love-you-boo♥]

This is really sweet its really good awesome go you got a real talent

[rwar ish me]

this is very nice
Its sweet, and a joy to read
Good work
~Amai

[Sarah16]

this is very good :)

[XinHyun]

very great :)

[Chrissy]

Lovely........