The Wind

Not your normal wind.

Oh, what a feeling
As the wind passes by,
Rushing over and through,
the pale blue sky.

Every part of me,
is filled with air,
washing away my worries,
washing away my cares.

Oh, what a feeling,
that the wind brings,
Oh, how it hollers,
Oh, how it sings.

Suddenly the wind dies,
and I am left flat,
Suddenly the wind dies,
As I go "splat."

Reviews

[The Water Queen]

This is a wondeful poem. It flows nicely and ryhmes perfectly.
These are by far my favorite lines:

Suddenly the wind dies,
and I am left flat,
Suddenly the wind dies,
As I go "splat."

Great poem. Continue writing.

[The High Poet]

Great I am the first one to review this great poem! Your word flowed like the wind! Thanks for the read request