I Walk Among the Souls fo Hell

Have you ever felt that you were in a place where you can't escape?

I walk among the souls of hell
where the devil lies asleep,
where demons howl with laughter,
and corrupted souls wail and weep.

I walk among those hidden paths,
where the devil can cause no pain,
or hit me with his fiery darts,
 or dark ashes in acid rain.

I walk among the souls of hell,
where the devil raises fires,
and people are thrown into them,
because of their earthly desires.

Others walk alone in darkness,
and shall wander for eternity,
and never find their way out,
and be ripped of comfort and certainty.

I laugh at those I hate,
who are suffering unbearable torment,
and shall never live again,
and never taste from enjoyment.

Keep yourselves from this evil
or you shall sell your soul,
to the devil and his demons,
who live in that fiery hole.

But if it so happens you are tricked
and ripped from your spiritual shell,
Remember where you walk,
You and I walk among the souls of hell.

Author's Note

This poem is simply describing a place that I had to live in and is a place which I believe to be a hell on earth.

Reviews

[The Water Queen]

I love the imagery that you have gieven us to work with. This poem is dark and full of deepseeded anger. Great poem.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i understand and can relate to this write, and the description is very vivid

[Not A Writer]

Good imagery but if you are trying to convert an unbeliever, this poem simply is a turn-off. You got good rhyme scheme and you maintained it throughout the poem. A+ good job shade.

[Tara Murasaki]

Ohhh...very nice poem.
I like the imagery, although the parts in the middle where you go into talking bad about the souls and such, thats not as much fun.
I like the parts where you walk untouched through the chaos of the Christian Hell, very nice!