YOUR EMBRACE

As the clouds drift up above,
The sky embraces them with love.


The rain drops falling on the sand,
Gently touch the thirsty land.


 The shore embraces them with glee.
The waves that rise up from the sea.


The mighty sun spreads out its rays,
And takes the Earth in its embrace.


My empty soul lets out a sigh,
O hug me, hold me till I die.

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

Wow! This is beautiful! Seeing that warm embrace in the existence and its beautiful manifestations and bringing out beautifully is the work of real poets. The poet in you is shining brightly in this soothing craft, Haiderji. Reading this one is an absolute pleasure.
Thank you for sharing..

[Shabeeh Haider]

Bala, your words are always very inspiring and heart warming. Thank you for such generous comments.

[Bala Gorthi]

Reading your work is my pleasure Sir.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I absolutely love the feeling of an embrace...to have the arms of someone I love wrap around me in a hug. I'm never the one to be the first one to let go!

Wonderfully written, Shabeeh!

[Shabeeh Haider]

We all feel this way Kelly, thank you for your kind words.

[Manu]

A heart soothing piece...And really really beautiful.I could feel this write, Sir.
Magic of nature is like that and it possess a mystical essence in it. We are ought to fall for it. The sun, the sky, the sea, the rain and the soul..what not
I loved this.
Great one.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Gorthi, nature has always been mystical and inspiring for man.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

[Manu]

Your welcome, Sir :)

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Thank you for your recent comments on my work.

These couplets are quite nice and full of emotional content.

I will return,

Alisa ;-)

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you Alisa :)

[James]

So very beautiful. Always a treat to read you.

[Shabeeh Haider]

James, thank you. Always wonderful to read your review.

[Tony Jordan]

I think the soul behind the pen of this is far from empty. The gentleness and love of Nature affords the reader a feeling of 'floating' almost.
Yes, this I like Shabeeh
Well penned

[Shabeeh Haider]

Tony, thank you for such wonderful and inspiring words.

[Tony Jordan]

Welcome Shabeeh - very welcome

[Jamey]

Lovely couplet...first and second particularly stand out to me

[Shabeeh Haider]

Jamey, thank you for your kind words.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Every line was so poetic and was reread with caesura. Lovely imagery, and the ending description was most appropriate. :) Tyfs

[Shabeeh Haider]

Cyprian. Thank you for your kind words

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome :)

[YanZeros]

I can imagine you wearing nothing as you open your arms far and wide, facing the sky, embracing the beautiful atmosphere of nature.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Yan, our imagination knows no bounds. Thank you for your review

[YanZeros]

I enjoyed reading it. Thank you too! :D

[Anindita Janhabee]

simple...
sweet...
honest...
and too lovely with the ideas of different elements put here along with the title...
very nice piece ...
Anindita

[Shabeeh Haider]

Anindita, thank you for such kind words