THE SILENT STORM

THE SILENT STORM

A Poem by Shabeeh Haider

The splashing of the oceans,

 Is very loud and clear.

The roaring of the thunder,

 Is deafening to the ear.

 

  But when the heart is broken,

 Though storms inside abound,

 In silence you will suffer,

No one can hear the sound.          

© 2016 Shabeeh Haider


Author's Note

Shabeeh Haider
From my book: A VAGABOND HEART

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Deeply emotive Shabeeh, no storm can cover the echoes of heartbreak, poignant :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

8 Years Ago

Poppy, thank you for your kind words
Ruth

8 Years Ago

My pleasure Shabeeh :)
Very good poem sir, especially the last two lines... as usual, it takes away my complete attention.... well done...
Anindita : )

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

8 Years Ago

You have always been very kind with your words. Thank you Anindita
Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

most welcome...
You write such fine poems! If I am not wrong, then it is about how a heartbroken person feels, right?


Posted 8 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

8 Years Ago

Yes, Akshita. It's about a heart break. It kills you from inside but the outside world in not aware
There's a saying...he who is sad, doesn't speak.
You sum up the feeling of melancholy very well!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review
no one can hear those tears inside...it is a silent storm...
you capture the feeling so well here.

terrific imagery.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

8 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob
True, poetic and amazingly said! Great poem! :) Sometimes it seems the fact that it's silent tears us apart.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shabeeh Haider

8 Years Ago

Cyprian, thank you
Cyprian Van Dyke

8 Years Ago

You're most welcome!

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Writing poetry is my passion. I have been writing since I was 10 years of age. I love the poets of the Romantic Era and am very particular about rhyme, meter and balance. I have also written many Gha.. more..

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