THE SILENT STORM

The splashing of the oceans,

 Is very loud and clear.

The roaring of the thunder,

 Is deafening to the ear.

 

  But when the heart is broken,

 Though storms inside abound,

 In silence you will suffer,

No one can hear the sound.          

Author's Note

From my book: A VAGABOND HEART

Reviews

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

This one has deep emotional content.

I've read through a few of your poems, though I do in write in freestyle, I trust you'll stop by again sometime...

Until then,

Alisa

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you Alisa.
I will stop by soon

[Alisa Js]

I, too have some published books on amazon.com

as well as smashwords.com

read moreI, too have some published books on amazon.com

as well as smashwords.com

My free one is on smashwords.com titled.. Reflections from a Wounded Heart


if you're interested, I invite you to take a look. Where can I buy your books????

Curious,

Alisa

[Shabeeh Haider]

that's wonderful

[YanZeros]

Trying to contain it so no one will bother. Coz' if you let it out you'll end up roaring like the thunderstorm! This is very nice Shabeeh Haider :D

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you for your very kind words.

[YanZeros]

You're welcome! :D

[Bala Gorthi]

Very beautifully expressed here, Shabeeh Haider jI.
A broken heart's pain is so severe that if it is voiced, their sounds would be definitely deafening to ear..The agony, the helplessness, the lament and all the pain that takes volumes to express you have beautifully and crisply crafted in this write... I have no words to say how much this short piece touched my heart.
Thank you very much for sharing this piece...

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you for your very kind words, Bala.
I an glad this has touched your heart.

[Bala Gorthi]

You are welcome sir.

[Lorry]

So very true and beautifully captured within so few lines. Superb.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Nemo, thank you for this beautiful review

[Lorry]

Welcome :)

[Paul Bell]

Dark room is always needed when love leaves the building. It will come round again.

[Shabeeh Haider]

thank you Paul for your words

[Marianne Rose]

Love this short piece and the parallel between nature and love. A great capturing of the broken heart, and how different it is to suffer in silence when the actual storm rages inside. I like the rhyming too- though familiar in the first stanza, the second one really tells the story. Great job!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Marianne, thank you for your kind words

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This is a great description of a broken heart. Especially, the silence you will suffer. We there is a storm inside we typically just stay quiet. Great description of the "storm". N.

[Shabeeh Haider]

N. Thank you for such a wonderful review.

[stargirl23]

Once again, I loved the rhymes and imagery--your poems are always beautiful!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Adi, thank you so much

[emmajoy]

How very true ... the strength of man-made pain hurt really can be compared with the savagery of heavy weather. Plus, more often or not, we can't control what's happening. Beautiful put.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you, emmajoy

[rachellynn]

Really enjoyed this. It's beautiful how such a short poem could have so much meaning and feeling. Wonderful job.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Rachellyn, thank you for your kind words