O HIDE ME MY LOVE

O hide me my love, in the depth of your gaze,

In the warmth of your arms for the rest of my days.

 

O keep me my love, in the dreams in your eyes.

In the tears that you shed, in your smiles and your sighs.

 

O show me my love, all the thoughts that reside

In the vault of your heart, where they silently hide.

 

O find me my love, in the words you don’t speak,

In the grin on your lips, in the blush on your cheek.

 

 

O give me my love, all the love you can send,

That will stay in my heart till the days of life end.

 

 

O take me my love, take my soul and my heart,

And heal the past wounds, never tear me apart.

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Rhymes perfectly....
excellent...
each line describing a unique feeling,
each word having its own meaning...
this is something called true love,
it's never going to fade even if you are made apart.....
beautiful flow, I could add some tune and sing it inside my mind.....
one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read.... good job!!!
Anindita

[Shabeeh Haider]

Anindita, with such encouraging words, I can only hope to get better. Thank you for such a lovely review

[Anindita Janhabee]

I am still singing the verse..I am totally lost..can I be a bit personal to ask u whether it was a real experience or a fiction...

[Shabeeh Haider]

All my poetry is derived from real life experiences.
Some are mine, some are others.
You have a sweet and unique name. What does it mean?

[Anindita Janhabee]

Anindita means faultless and Janhabee means a holy river gangaa or as precious as life....

[Shabeeh Haider]

That is sweet. I hope you live up to your name.

[Anindita Janhabee]

hope so..thank you..

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, when a love can share all and bring warmth, it is the real thing. What a wonderful love poem this is, Shabeeh. Lydi**

[Shabeeh Haider]

Lydi, thank you so much

[jacob erin-cilberto]

to have love shield and protect us...it's a good thing when that happens....it allows us to trust again...to have faith that love can be real, deep and stay.

[Shabeeh Haider]

It does. Thank you for your review

[Shannon]

Every word thoughtfully crafted. Maintain a structure, without ever feeling like it is a burden. Lovely!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you S. Mi for your very kind words

[Shy_muse]

SO BEAUTIFUL! I love how this captures love at it's most raw form ~ where one person opens their heart and soul up entirely to another person. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts < 3

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you for your very kind review

[AliciaB]

This is beautiful! I love the rhyme, and the flow of the words is good too. The repetition of "O..." with a different verb each time is lovely. I really like the images used to describe this person. Each portrays a unique aspect and is vivid and touching in its detail. "In the dreams in your eyes", "In the vault of your heart", "In the grin on your lips, in the blush on your cheek" - beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this. Nice work!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you Alicia for your very kind words