MY WORDS OF LOVE

  

I sew the letters one by one,

The words then form a line.

And when you read them as a verse,

Your heart will melt in mine.

 

I bought you with these words of love,

That I write night and day.

And though you try, I’ll tell you clear,

You cannot turn away.

 

My words will glide over your skin,

Inhaling your sweet smell.

And then they enter every pore

Where they will always dwell.

 

My words will bore in to your soul,

They’ll wrap around your mind.

And like a lover’s hungry touch,

They’ll feel and search and find.

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow! Shabeeh, its a masterpiece!
With each stanza I felt like this is what a writer's fantasy should be like.
Absolutely loved this poem! Adding it to my favorites' list!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Jyoti, thank you for your very kind words and for the honour of adding it to your favourites.
I am glad that you loved this poem

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are very welcome.

[GalaxyGhost]

This poem would make an amazing song! I love the flow of the poem and it seems like a serenade under the moon. You are a wonderful poet!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Galaxy, thank you for your words. I am glad you enjoyed it

[hania azhar]

Flawless Shabeeh. i love the first stanza. The whole poem is written very well. Keep up the good work. :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

Hania, I am glad you enjoyed the poem

[hania azhar]

Pleasure..

[Insight "MH"]

I love the strong passion shown here, and the last two stanzas made the poem raise to another level.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed the poem

[Insight "MH"]

My pleasure.

[Gee]

Near flawless.......very good

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you for your kind words

[Fahmida Mehreen]

I loved how you wrapped it up.
The last line is very sensuous and honest and faithful.

Yet another good work, Shabeeh.

[Shabeeh Haider]

I am glad that you liked the conclusion. I meant to make it sensuous (:

[Emily]

Great first stanza!
Well done!!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Emily, thank you

[Ruth]

Beautiful...delicate and intricate...I like the gentle flow to this...has a charm :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you for your sweet review

[James]

Really cool. A very passionate poem with near perfect rhyme. I liked it very much.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you James for your very kind words

[jacob erin-cilberto]

words have much power, that is for sure.

and for us poets, they are our weapon to triumph over another's heart...

nicely done.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Yes, Jacob, Words are our weapon. Thank you for your review