SEASONS

Can seasons be ruled by your mood? 

You laugh at times, at times you brood. 

Your loving look makes flowers bloom, 

One smile from you drives away gloom.

 Each time a tear falls from your eye,

 Black clouds appear, the heavens’ cry.

 You turn away and autumn’s here, 

The garden’s bare, leaves disappear. 

Your soft caress has made me greet,

 In cold December, summer’s heat.

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful poem.
Love is a strong emotion, it is as strong as to drive the life.
Well penned piece. Lovely.

PS: I feel that the exclamation mark at the end is kind of ruining the otherwise beautiful, serene flow. Maybe one can be removed for better effect.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you for you very lovely review. I do agree with you about the exclamation mark. I don't remember how it got there. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are very welcome. I enjoy your work.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Ive for the first time seen such an intelligent comparison of seasons with one's mood. Today my literal season is clear sky and so is the real.
" In cold December, summer’s heat."
Excellent!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Shabeeh Haider,
"SEASONS"
The opening question; "Can seasons be ruled by your mood." Oh Yes! Our hearts are true and honest to our own season.
You named well the seasons within our lives; "Your loving look makes flowers bloom" and "A tear falls from your eye, black clouds appear, The heavens cry"
So fitting to our need for interaction with others and the coinciding emotion.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Gee]

Simple, easy to understand poetry written well. Good job

[Sheila Kline]

There are those who may rule every season of our world as you say with such clarity. I especially like your ending couplet as the cold of December becomes like the heat of summer. 'Tis a season not soon forgotten!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Sheila, you have said it so well. Thank you for your review

[wisemorie]

I like your joyous tone of the poem.

[Shabeeh Haider]

wisemorie, thank you for your words

[Woody]

you have a unique soft touch. with you, no big words, no complicated hidden meanings. such a joy to read you, Haider.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you for such wonderful words, Woody. I am glad you enjoy reading my poetry.

[Adroaldo Barbosa Jr.]

So powerful poem... thank you for the delicious writing Shabeeh. I like very much your poems.

[Shabeeh Haider]

I am glad you enjoyed it, Adroaldo

[Kuro]

I just love your poetry. It reminds me of the works of great artists like Gulistan-e-Saadi.

[Shabeeh Haider]

You humble me with your very kind words.

[barleygirl]

Being a very moody person, I can relate to this poem very much. I remember back in the day when I was young & had many suitors, my moods would affect them greatly, just as you're describing. Nowadays, I try to be less up-and-down, but the moods still rule to a certain degree. I especially love the way you use scenes from nature to signify the ups & downs. Very well-selected analogies thru-out.

[Shabeeh Haider]

I kind of feel sorry for those suitors who were at the mercy of the moods of the fair damsel. :) read moreI kind of feel sorry for those suitors who were at the mercy of the moods of the fair damsel. :)
Thank you for your very kind review