It would be a huge honor to be thought of this way by anyone. I love the way you combine the various mediums of artistic endeavor we may use to try to express all that we're feeling inside. I love the way your words are selected for maximum imagery, such that it's like a combination poem & word painting. But the most impactful lines are the last two. It's expressed in a simple, clear way, but it's so very true-to-life for most of us. Just love those last 2 lines!
I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Somehow words always fail to deliver out true thoughts
8 Years Ago
I almost ALWAYS feel like I'm not quite getting my arms around the full message I wish to make . . ... read moreI almost ALWAYS feel like I'm not quite getting my arms around the full message I wish to make . . . *sigh*
"MY PAINTINGS'
Shabeeh Haider,
Surly the wonder of the total complexities of a loved one cannot be totally displayed within words. I think wonder is the right word for this beauteous and wondrous reality. To know and care for another and be given the privilege is so lovely. This poem reminded me of the joy of love's blessing.
Kathy
It would be a huge honor to be thought of this way by anyone. I love the way you combine the various mediums of artistic endeavor we may use to try to express all that we're feeling inside. I love the way your words are selected for maximum imagery, such that it's like a combination poem & word painting. But the most impactful lines are the last two. It's expressed in a simple, clear way, but it's so very true-to-life for most of us. Just love those last 2 lines!
I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Somehow words always fail to deliver out true thoughts
8 Years Ago
I almost ALWAYS feel like I'm not quite getting my arms around the full message I wish to make . . ... read moreI almost ALWAYS feel like I'm not quite getting my arms around the full message I wish to make . . . *sigh*
Expression is the muse for all arts this truly represents a artist feeling stunted yet if all the words could be captured there would be no more room for new artists
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
You have a point here, Raylene. If a poem had captured the true essence of beauty, there would be no.. read moreYou have a point here, Raylene. If a poem had captured the true essence of beauty, there would be no need for further poetry.
Writing poetry is my passion. I have been writing since I was 10 years of age. I love the poets of the Romantic Era and am very particular about rhyme, meter and balance.
I have also written many Gha.. more..