Going Through It

Why life got to be this way
So much going on can't stay in one place
Losing my mind
Out of control
To much s**t going on
Nobody understands me
Nobody cares
My life is miserable going thru this struggle
Pray
Pray
Pray for the Lord to help me
But only the Devil answers
I need guidence
I need help
Before I take my last breath
Prayers unanswered
Prayers unheard
I only hear the devils word
Being patient with the Lord
To see the light to shine on mylife
Cause when it do I know its going to be aright...

Author's Note

What do you think

Reviews

[Luke Rawlings]

It sounds a difficult contest this poem.... it sounds like a mixture of conflict and trying to find a direction. Your use of God and the Devil interests me a great deal. I read it similar to a rap, it flows well as both that and a poem. You adopt a theme of isolation near the beginning as well, it really gives an impact and a good basis for the rest of the poem. A good piece, I enjoyed reading it. You should write more, I would happily give it a read :)

[Shanice]

Thanks and I will post more

[Ahmad Cox]

Very thoughtful and honest poem. I really appreciated the raw emotions and feelings you bring to this poem.

[Shanice]

thanks