Lationships

How now my lady
Grown,
This feelings heavy for either
To bear alone.

Reviews

[Seyi Ojenike]

Thanks Christy, yes I meant relationships but wasn't intending to have it fully spelt... Apart from grammatical errors in poetry, unlike prose and other works of literature, poet have the chance to digress. For example, I can decide to spell my "beautiful" as "bewtyful" or "beautyful" anyhow I wish, in poetry it is called POETIC LICENCE.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Yes.

[Melati]

Nice poem! Do you mean "Relationship?" I think you forgot the r. As well, there are grammatical errors . A lot of good writers, they are lack of competance about other languages. Some languages especially in Asia, they don't have rules such as the following: present tense, past tense, past perfect tense, plural tense, etc.There are many languages written in back words, for the following examples: Spanish, Arabic, Portuguese, Tagalog, Malaysian and some Asian Countries. As well like the native Japanese speaker are have difficulty in distinguishing the "r" and "I."
Also the Spanish speaker, Arabic, Tagalog, Korean, and other Asian countries have difficulty distinguishing "b' and "v."

The "English" language contains a very large vocabulary, with complex and irregular spelling particularly of vowels. As well the Russian and German. In English language there are acronyms and abbreviations and it can be difficult and confussing. English can cause difficulties for many learners because they have several meanings and different syntactic patterns. Because of the "phrasal verbs" as known as multiple-words verbs. I have learned British English before I cam to U.S and I had some difficulty when I write "honour" in American English "honor" or "colour" to "color" and there are many more that I have to be careful when I write in American English.

Some of the people that are not knowing about different languages my thought, that the non-native English speaker are "palindrome." They tend to critize and they are lack of knowledge in different languages rules. Thanks for sharing!Just keep writting and you will get better :)