London (Unfinished Verse)

How I long to see your streets
Where I would stand alone
To take a glimpse,
To behold what beauty,
When lights illuminate the night.
Breath in fresh air
From the dark skies,
When pregnant clouds race
In anticipated rain storm
And smile at the golden sun
In the morning after.
Like this would not suffice,
My raging desires,
I would satisfy,
Making haste to take rides
On top of the double-decked
Buses,
Those big red monsters,
Viewing the beauty and magnificence
Of your landscape.

Reviews

[afra]

this was perfect ...i dont think its unfinished ...any way well done

[Seyi Ojenike]

Thanks, Lol... Wait till you read the full version

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW! ...and this is unfinished??...It's breathtaking as it is. Gorgeous write indeed!

"When pregnant clouds race
In anticipated rain storm
And smile at the golden sun
In the morning after."~ Fantastic imagery!

[Seyi Ojenike]

Thank you, glad that you like it... And yes it is unfinished ^_^