For My Wife (Unfinished Verse)

Would you be dark or light
I cannot say
No mirror of future to fore-tell
But your beauty so bright
Like you cast a spell.
With you an ogre, you shall stay
And bring forth progeny, beautiful
Like a new day.
That fresh air around you,
Calm and cool
And together we can have our sky
Bright and blue
To whence love falls, we shall pull.

Reviews

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Good start! your going to continue it right? It would be kind of sad to just leave it as is.

[Seyi Ojenike]

Of course yes, that's why it's an unfinished verse.