Sentence (For Geri)

Let a kiss
Of eternal bliss, sweet and wet
Moist the damp lips
Of a lover standing restlessly
Half awake
Under the blue skies
In a bright early morning
When the harmless dew,
Gleefully
Takes down to playful earth
To caress the fields on which
Lovers stand.

Reviews

[Talismanic]

Sensuality - the anxiety of anticipation and the of fulfilment - love to replenish a barren world.

[Tate Morgan]

Young love everything sweeter

[Eloha]

This is from the soil of love and time herself, I like it, earthly romantic.

[Seyi Ojenike]

Thank you very much Eloha ^_^

[kublakhan27]

Very nice piece^^

[The Refined Poet]

true reflection of poetic romance, beautiful write.

[Seyi Ojenike]

Thanks

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh my!! This is refreshing! The title fools me... This a nice surprise! So Romantic!

[Seyi Ojenike]

Yeah! That's cuz its just one sentence, thanks for your review... I'll review yours any day, any time.

[SmileBig :)]

i like this. well done :)

[Seyi Ojenike]

Thank you very much