Princess

Kinda stupid , no real train of though . I was bored . :P

A story falls from a height unknown ,
love is found between people who don't mesh ,
A fairytale love is created ,
where reality would never allow .

A princess in a tower ,
a knight in shining armor ,
a damsel in distress ,
but there should be a princess ,
who doesn't need help .

A princess who's strong ,
a prince who is weak ,
and for the reality to set in ,
and the princess saved the prince .

There should be a princess ,
who wasn't unintelligent ,
a princess who was everything ,
that they never let us be .

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I have a wish. I wish that Aching Alexandra
would become happy and not ache anymore.
This is an exquisitely well written piece.
It is is a sort of inside joke however, we
outsiders are probably not supposed to know
the dark secrets this poet lives.
Good luck and God bless.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[persianleopard]

This poem turns my fairytale world completely upside down--in a good way. :)

[Distant horizons]

Excellent use of language from the start. Especially love that first line.