What would you do?

What would you do?

A Poem by AchingAlexandra

What would you do,
if I just disappeared?
Would you care,
Or just keep doing what you do?

What would you do,
If I just left?
Would you care,
If I died?

What would you do,
if I just up and ended my life,
Would you even care,
enough to go to my funeral?

What would you do,
if I stopped smiling?
Would you even care,
enough to try and make me laugh?

What would you do,
If I stopped loving you?
Would you even care,
enough to say goodbye?

What would you do,
If I never stopped crying,
and it was all your fault?


what would you do?


 . . . . . . . What would you do . . . . . . . ?

© 2011 AchingAlexandra


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I would care. I loved your wording, it was such a sad but super read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I would definitely care amour!!!!!!! I love you! :) good but super sad write. Miss ya girly :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


what would I do, there are no answers I suppose, i love you wording scheme, well penned, good read

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love how there is such powerful emotions behind this piece. It's a goot poem and I love the ending.
good job!
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


I feel like the anger is dwindling towards the end, turning into desperation. Powerful write

Posted 13 Years Ago



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AchingAlexandra
AchingAlexandra

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I'm a really nice person, but I have a lot of issues. I love writing, it helps ebb the regular pain I have. First name: Courtney Middle Name: Alexandra I'm purely myself. I don't change to fit.. more..

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