Broken

everything spirals out of my control,

I lose my handle,

I lose my mind,

I lose my tears,

they slide down my cheek,

I can't stand it anymore,

stress,

pain,

fear,

love,

there is no more handle,

or foothold,

is this mess I call life,

I love Kyle,

I love Eric,

I like Sam,

My friends leave,

my brothers move,

broken heart,

my soul departs from me,

as every part of me,

is slowly torn away,

I leave you know,

with even more tears,

flowing down my cheeks,

Goodbye.

Reviews

[hmm]

emotional write and really quite sad, well written

[watch_the_world]

so sad, great write, but so sad, theres this song called Broken by Seether feat. Amy Lee (from evanescence) and its really good, and somewhat similar to this.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

o.O
full of depressions...
*shivers*