Like You've Never Hurt Before

Inspiration from a 10 Years song "Fix Me"

I’ve felt you burn

You said it felt so good

I’ve seen you fall

You said it happens all the time

 

I’ve felt you care

Something you said you weren’t used to

And I’ve held you close

On a dark and stormy night

 

And now I see you changing

Towards a smile you never were used to

And now I see you moving

Away from the fire to be in my arms

Any now I hear you laughing

Away from any pain you felt before

And now I feel you kiss me

Like you’ve never hurt before

 

I’ve felt your tears

You said that you were stronger than that

I’ve seen you breathe

Like you took your final breath

 

I’ve felt your hands

Brush against my face as you

Looked in my eyes

And said I’m the best you’ve ever had

 

And now I see you changing

Towards a smile you never were used to

And now I see you moving

Away from the fire to be in my arms

Any now I hear you laughing

Away from any pain you felt before

And now I feel you kiss me

Like you’ve never hurt before

 

I’ve felt this place

It’s the last place I want to ever be

Right here with you next to me

With no pain at all

 

I’ve felt your face

And the smile spread across your cheeks

That night we watched the thunderstorm

I’ll never let you go

And now I see you changing

Towards a smile you never were used to

And now I see you moving

Away from the fire to be in my arms

Any now I hear you laughing

Away from any pain you felt before

And now I feel you kiss me

Like you’ve never hurt before

Reviews

[Nightwind]

I really enjoyed this poem man. I can feel both sides of male/ female perspective, not going back and forth; but seeing how one side felt and then the other. The chorus is a nice touch as well. Can definitely see where the inspiration from the song comes in. Look forward to the rest you post :)