Flow Free

I can feel a wave,
Moving through me,
It's energy becoming my own,
Drawn up from my spirits well.

Ebb and flow,
It's waters clear my mind,
Hold, crescendo, burst,
The dam breaks loose.

The energy moves,
twisting through,
The stale sea air,
Igniting the night.

It becomes a dance,
Between the elements,
Fire, water, earth and air,
Moving in harmony with one another.

The gulls,
My only audience,
Watch from afar,
Squawking defiantly.

I am at peace,
Dancing in the flames,
Along to the beat,
Of the powerful sea,

I breath in,
The cool night air,
As my toes swirl around,
A million grains of sand.

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

I really like how you talk about the elements moving in harmony together; I can kinda visualize it as them all taking shape and dancing with each other or moving towards a common goal or something. Gotta say, my favorite stanzas are the 1, 3rd, 4th, 6th, and 7th. All of it is awesome, as usual, but those really struck a chord because of how vividly I could picture everything in my head. Well done, love ♥