Sunset

Time to live, time to explore,

The things we'll see, the fights we'll endure,

Things will get hard, sometimes you'll forget,

What its all for, the wasted time spent,

But its all worth it to see that sunset.

Reviews

[Cousitarian]

Lol, this made me think of my story. Jade, you know? This basically took my main character's life, made me remember it all, and think of how my ending is going to be. So, with this poem, you kind of put a writer's outline into a short colorful version. At dawn, the fable begins. At noon, there have been fights, conflict, exploration, and time wasted. At dusk, it's still all worth seeing the end of the journey or the sunset. Still, for Jade, the sunset is far off. Very far off. Is it okay if I give you 100/100 for this? Yeah, it is.

[Eryn ♪]

Wow thanks. I never looked at it like that. You have an interesting view on things. Thank you.

[Aly]

I like this alot.
Good job.
It flowed well and even though I thought of traveling, this poem was a fun read :)

[rnuff]

I really enjoyed this write, to the point and well written

[Ki Rider]

I see how this relates to life. It shows the meaning behind living. We do only live once. So we should make the most of it, so that at the end we can look back and know it was worth it. Trials are a hard thing in life, but then make us stronger and they change our life for better or worse, whichever way we let them do.