Mating Waltz

Mating Waltz

A Poem by Sethnicity
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Emphasis + Sethnicity = Emphatic Musicality

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((SETHNICITY))

No need to speak
your eyes can say it all
consider the bee and flower,
do they have feeding calls?

Your Jap wrap dress
and the faux fur of your boots
like a cherry blossom branch
no need to lance me on Hooks

I'm ready all ready
to run your miracle mile
marathon from your Mane
swim your legs like river Nile

Take my time to compose
a short sweet gesture to propose
One dance with you two step eyes closed
three beats and hold four hands arms rose

Hearts engulfed in the movements
Our thoughts are congruent
At the end of the music
Our Bodies seem to refuse it

Your hands on my chest 
My mitts on your thighs
Focusing my rhythm
to the storm in your eye
the outsiders see swing dance
but there's a lot of dirty
As You lean through in slide

I want that twist remembered
as I dip you to the floor
I want your nail marks in me
As we side arm pour
With the band behind us
We sweat like sex, thrust kick score

 

 

((EMPHASIS))

In this exotic tango for two

We set fire to the stage

Slip on the drips

Slide on the drops

Uncovering wish as our positions change

 

I like the sound of defining hours

A desired press within your silent moan

This dance goes better without the band

We hush its melody to make our own

 

Follow the invite protected in my eyes

Tread slow in the want of breaking Identify

the moist as it locks into the air Justify

the marvelous while cascading your artistry

 (Seth < Sigh)

I bend to your touch

Let my body fall back in surrender

A motion that brings pleasure to us both

It’s the craving that takes us under

 

Fist your hand into my hair

Take me with sensual force

Unleash this passion that builds within me

Let hearts fever take its course

 

Play your mouth like a teasing whisper

Lather me in rhymes soft and sexy

Absorb the seductive sway of my movements

mmmmmmm…. Right there….

As my knees go weak in releasing

© 2012 Sethnicity


Author's Note

Sethnicity
Emphasis is A good dancer... as well as a writer! ;)
Get some tea and blankets and cuddle up with her lucid language.. :P YUM!

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You'd have probably made the sale had you merely posted: "...swim your legs like river Nile."
Her "Play your mouth like a teasing whisper" would, in any event, have closed the deal.
Look how much more we got for our non-money!
One fabulous collaboration; yielding a torrid song fashioned by verbal excellence.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I've already reviewed this once...coming back for more.

swim your legs like river Nile


Clever line! Sums up the music behind this poem. A smooth dance...it has me in a trance!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sethnicity

12 Years Ago

One good Dance deserves another... :D thank you!
You'd have probably made the sale had you merely posted: "...swim your legs like river Nile."
Her "Play your mouth like a teasing whisper" would, in any event, have closed the deal.
Look how much more we got for our non-money!
One fabulous collaboration; yielding a torrid song fashioned by verbal excellence.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow!...This dance is Sexy and irresistible to read. I had to read it again! Your words flow together fabulously...weaving effortlessly in a sensual rhythmic dance. I believe you both have great poetic chemistry. Excellent write...Congrats!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very rhythmic and erotic poem. Your prose here is lush and your descriptions are richly decadent and full of movement. I especially was fond of this part, "I'm ready all ready
to run your miracle mile
marathon from your Mane
swim your legs like river Nile."

I really enjoyed this delicious journey into romanticism. Glad you shared. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The movement within your poetry is inspiring. Rhythmic flight I find when reading your creative vision.)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emphasis is my sis, and I love her!

Wonderful one!!

" I'm ready all ready
to run your miracle mile
marathon from your Mane
swim your legs like river Nile "

The original Greek Marathon ran in old Greek times, 42,5 European KM's to reach the beloved one, he had a letter for, he died when he arrived"
This speaks so many volumes... I loved loved loved it! Yummy!


E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now that was a journey! :) Good to be back and read you love, still pumping the atmosphere with excellent and tangible vibrancy, I see :) xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sethnicity

12 Years Ago

I'm So glad you are back! and you went straight for the music poem collab! You are still on your gam.. read more
Ruth

12 Years Ago

lol Yup. mwah!
Damn this crazy good. I read this and was enthralled by it. I was wrapped up in a big coozy blanket and waltzing at the same time. What a wonderful use of words and phrase and the play that each of them dances with, Oh my what my eyes have read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sethnicity

12 Years Ago

Thanks RW! like they say... Oohh The Words we Weave... Or something like that! :)
realmwriter

12 Years Ago

Your very welcome...!
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Phew! Now that is substance!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sethnicity

12 Years Ago

You are TOO funny Lynn Thank You!

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