I am the bed...

Inspiration is like a river... and I am the River Bed.

The Searching Yeti and UFO/
Stocked home love of youth and foe/
mysteries of deep, songs that bellow/
 I'm waving wheat surrounding crop circle/

and I Am The Bed with Fibonacci flower

holding  on to summer showers


The hot oil tuned in chopped green thyme/
wrinkled strips sandy brown sugared lines/
tossed on foul fried, lemon and vinegar /
long or short  grain I'll be the same integer/
I Am The Bed of rice soaked in what you savor

The breath of air
Vibration! Everywhere?
Pitter Patter Crescendo Flare...
Ready for rivers of precipitation /
before Pen and Paper dissemination /
I Am The Bed dried wide open

Streaming to the notion ocean.

Author's Note

My attempt at a Homographical poem about getting inspiration in Bed.
Kudos to Krystallo who's poem "Goldish" inspired the bed homographical metaphor.
check her out... I'm already her biggest fan but everyone else can have a close second! :P



/ in place of commas due to font type but you get the gist for all the structure& discipline readers. All critiques welcome!

Reviews

[Muse]

You became a door...a gateway of ever flowing kinetic energy. You write about an experience? Do you not? Inspiration finds us in the most obscure places. But in bed....like anything else...is most intimate. We are most fragile when lying half awake. Our thoughts an open portal to both worldly and other worldly travels. This is pretty freaking cool of you to explore this....what do you call it...homographical metaphor? Can you provide definition please...you caught my intrigue! :))

High scores

Muse

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

reminds me of losing my virginity while the movie pi was playing...your poem is much more competent than i was

this is a very strong composition..it has a vibe with strong and gentle hands acting intuitively and viscerally

[Sethnicity]

Thanks Bongo! Man I appreciate the state-ment that you create. Like virginity it came and went, but you bend, backwards and took the time to contemplate. and I'll do the same for you just wait don't get irate. I'm working on an Album that I can't let deflate. :)

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

an album you say...my ears just perked up

[...]

Seth, what an exquisite journey and how beautifully you have shared it with your viewers! 'Streaming to the notion of ocean'. What a way to say, traveling to the depths...expansion! Gorgeous writing :)

[Sethnicity]

Thank you so much Lynn! You give the kindest comments! :D I need them.

[Poetic Justice]

I come back to this? How can I compete? My friend, you have created a masterpiece of intrigue...your clever use of language and your playful grasp of literature and history is inspiring..you take yourself to a place not many dare to wander and come home smelling of flowers! bravo.

[Zackery Alan Daley]

The breath of air
Vibration! Everywhere?
Pitter Patter Crescendo Flare...

Real Rhyme Saying right there my friend. Doing WORK.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Very cryptic yet brilliant as you spread the flow. Thanks for sharing this piece. Peace and love dear friend.
~P

[Kristallo]

I love that you referenced the Fibonacci sequence with the flowers! How wonderful. "I am the bed dried wide open/ streaming to the notion ocean." So clever, Seth! As always, I love your ubiquitous style so much. I love your rhymes, and the word play, and the imagery is all pure grandeur! 'Pitter patter crescendo flair.' That so buoyant and fun, here you seem to have admirably captured all aspects of pleasure and you've expressed it beautifully. Great write, Seth!

[Sethnicity]

Thanks you for understanding me!! :)

[Dean Kuch®]

Fibonacci (fē'bə-nä'chē) Pronunciation Key
Italian mathematician who popularized the modern arabic system of numerals in the western world and discovered the Fibonacci sequence of integers
I thoroughly enjoy poety that makes me 'think', and this one did just that! (I even had to look up a few things, as you can see :) ), but it was well worth it! The bouncy rythmn almost as intoxicating as it's meanings...
Nice!