Love...

In my crystal Lake

I have been pushed and have taken the plunge
I have tripped in the wandering woods
I have hunted and preyed in the night...
Would you believe me if I said

I Loved it all even the fight?

through blood and shed
no warmth over head
fake food for hollow days
streams from your eyes
twinkle me blue star gaze

Worn soles and old friends
Kitchen fires blurred vision
packed bags long nights
Instruments of each others
whipped delusions and delights

Did we choose to or were we chosen?
Will we be forever broken?

I've been pushed and  taken the plunge
I've been trapped in the wandering woods.
I have hunted prey in the night...
Would you believe me if I said

I Loved it all despite...?

Jump Frogger on board between wafer thin pulses
A glowing screen a familiar name, impulses
either syntax err or  Zapp Rodger pair
silicone crystal we chat via air

Space travel on hope floats to unravel
conversation R We compackable
these moments like death tolls
add up 2, Are you faithful!?
Heart (pause) Jaw (falls)

Do you mean belief in the Unseen?
Could we ever take it back?

Does Love have boundaries?

I know my emotions are supernatural
like Oceans the fish within can not feel it all
These notions Man I Fessed into the actual
better question; Is my mission honest and factual?

My answer is Yes!
Love is the longest promise you could ever break.
emotionally contractual!

Author's Note

pooling in my heart space.

Reviews

[Kristallo]

Beautiful write, you ask strong questions here. Does love have boundries? That depends. Does our soul have boundries? Our imagination? Our will? I think boundries are only physical things, but when we're speaking of the existential, no, we have forgiving hearts and are capable of so much more. Anywho, I liked this, very esoteric- I feel I know these assertions intimately.

[Sethnicity]

you are correct to feel so connected.. for we shared some of these moments.... and they will forever stay with me.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Very thought provoking. Some love does come with boundaries, although I love with none... Not sure if that's healthy but I do. I think if love is TRUE it is unconditional but that is a hard love to encounter as most love with conditions, as I have learned the hard way. Love to you my friend! Nice write.

[emmajoy]

Most poets who write in a similar style to you leave me cold but, i always find phrases, stanzas, whatever, that ring a bell in your favour! As with this: 'Space travel on hope floats to unravel ~ conversation R We compackable ~ these moments like death tolls ~ add up 2, Are you faithful!? ~ Heart (pause) Jaw (falls) * Those words are dancing, really on the move in spite of the R and the 2 .. and the inventiveness is quite something.

' Do you mean belief in the Unseen? ~ Could we ever take it back? ~ Does Love have boundaries? ' * And there you tread water, creating pictures and asking questions and send the mind ticking. Maybe, maybe not over-edit .. it's more than good as it is.

[Sethnicity]

THANK YOU sO MUCH! I feel like you are really understanding where I'm coming from. this poem is about two different Lovers. And that (pause) actually happened in conversation... and those questions really did rip through my head not so much to be answered but to rebuttal and back pedal out of the corner I was in... I put a lot of thought into each space and phrase and capitalization that It's really rewarding when I feel someone is really dissecting my poems as I do! Thank you SO Much! P.S. since the second relationship is over a distance RW-compatible refers to rewriting a saved file and those such thoughts!

[emmajoy]

I try to understand my friends' writing, don't always succeed but seems i might have this time!

[Poetic Beauty]

Love does have boundaries for me no person.sahll ever.put their hands on me in anger. That I won't put.up with. This to me is almost like story of.trial and victory yet the journey is.never ending. Great write though intriguing

[Sethnicity]

Thank You for reading! :) I must say that "Physical Abuse" would not be a direct derivative of love.. so that would be excluded in the realm of loving and relationships, it would venture off into it's rival which is hate and anger.

[realmwriter]

This is really cool. The images I got flowed through my mind like the ink must have from the tip of your pen as you rendered this amazing work of art. A joy to read.

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Brilliant!!!! I WILL be back :)

[Honey54]

yes i love this because you ask one of the greatest questions known to man "Does Love have a boundary?" sometimes i feel like it does not....

[ghost writer]

will it be edited because your not happy with this beautiful masterpiece or because the story isn't finished..? Because I hope its the latter..favourite

[Sethnicity]

I don't think this story has an ending... :muah)

[rivers]

I love this man, I'll come back for the edits because it speaks to me right here, but I know how it goes. Really though, the cup runs over with most excellent metaphors and underlying soul connection.

"Did we choose to or were we chosen?
Will we be forever broken?" ..............Been there done that.

"I've been pushed and have taken the plunge
I've been trapped in the wandering woods.
I have hunted prey in the night...
Would you believe me if I said I Loved it all despite...?"

And then the last lines do it for me... Great writing my friend...

[Brittany]

Once a again, great words and beats and rhythm. Thank you.