SUDDEN DEATH

In the act usual moment

I have given my soul to the origin of sound
I make it look easy because ..., that's where I'm found
I've envisioned my ending before beginning my winning
running my pace, round and round in place
Even in Sudden Death I can echo resound
Long after I lay six feet in the underground

My song will live on long after I take flight
Take Heed Gain Bleed = inSight...
I just met Saul Williams I'd "like",
fall to my knees

Kiss the Earth for a truth has come
A truth that hurts a truth that works
My truth has been given a voice that mirrors
My inner echo

My soul is stirring
If I were chess or cat I'd be purring...

Author's Note

you should have been there...

Reviews

[Kristallo]

I like this one! I can really relate. Our song will play on long after we're gone, and its a lofty melody that carries in the wind. Beautifully written, sir. You must have been in a really peaceful place of mind at this time.

[MoriartyMesa]

Now this took me back to the old gridiron days, last man standing with the ball is the Hector of the field.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Holy s**t! man, you are one sharp cat!!!!
I think your flow is amazing! One tip.. read it aloud to yourself, then place comas, where you pause. Then the reader can catch the flow I KNOW is freaking amazing! Yet, I know because I read it aloud!:) lol