Inner Stella Speed Liter

I was sitting at work daydreaming at a chance coupling and I think this little bit of brainstorm will organize into a typhoon soon...

And heart palpitations are on the incline 
like a boa Love can feather 
or keep ya confined
So take my time 
While I unravel unwind 
like I'd watch you undress...
Progress! is what I dream.... 
when I mentally stray.
God bless with the words that I play
with you because I feel like it's dew
in the wilderness of cyber reality
you master mind-tality
like bliss in Fatality

You can scribble me limitlessly  
Visual Lyrical? Stimulate ME!
With smiles of miles and mile of sky
I dive through your atmosphere
flew between the storm in your eye
wish I may wish I might 
be the warm in your thigh...
but for now I'm out to dry
Lost in the space between You and I

Tell me again when I will see your flickering light
Tell me again before I begin and end while lost at flight
Two tack mind is surfing though every heavenly verse
It's not a curse when words woven together 
disperse
amongst the universe vibrations like 
church
humming hymnals holding candles 
the ceremony is matrimony of life and death
my muse my breath sonar emotion I woo
to The prophet is right eternity left
waters separate to bring together good news
Supernova black hole sun in contrasting hues 
hold my hand so I can steady my views...
Sorry for sleeping in service pews night dreaming of our deje vu. 
Now I'm ready to commune

if You prep the topic I'll fillet the tune... 
 





 




 



  

Author's Note

this is a tropical depression of my mind... waiting for the other half... and yes liter like the measuring unit.

Reviews

[Kristallo]

What a gorgeously expressed testimony to the temporal beatings of heart and mind in tandem and in flux with nature.... your imagery here is masterful, I could paint a canvas of these words and escape into the twilight of oceans in bliss. There are many lines here that struck me with their powerful lyrical flow, this section in particular:

With smiles of miles and mile of sky
I dive through your atmosphere
flew between the storm in your eye
wish I may wish I might
be the warm in your thigh...
but for now I'm out to dry
Lost in the space between You and I

Lovely, the first and second line drew my breath. Yes, I can feel the warmest shades of universal vibrations ringing true with the evocation of positive thoughts and matching environment. "humming hymnals holding candles
the ceremony is matrimony of life and death
my muse my breath sonar emotion I woo." --Had to point out this section, too, it deserved to be mentioned. This poem is a marvelous showcase to your true talent as a writer. It is enlightening and splashed with beautiful imagery and powerful prose. Wonderful job, my dear. :)

[Sethnicity]

Thank You my Dear... You unravel me with your flattery and introspection into my work.

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inspirations comes in many forms, some you feel, experience..others are more ambiguous..a thought, a desire..both transcend into beautiful and free flowing words which you have placed upon this page..this indeed feels like it flowed from your heart to your pen..

We must let go of the life we planned, so we can accept the one that is waiting for us
Joseph Campbell