freestyle2

I like to take my time. I am a lover not a hater so don't strangle yourself on the tentacle of my typewriter
then bemoan the muse who took pleasure in putting my phalac seaS in your rebutthull Im not the devil but I'm into D-tails and playing with Fire
I tailor suits for the invisible woman using words like fauxbrick and whittle out a rhyme as she travels the line of my minds Tightwire
It's a circus game of life and there are no survivors
taste the madness embrace the juice I'm just a poor wet tree under which you shelter and flee
my words are just leaves you compress and I tea.

So just release me

drink me slowly
and then release yourself

Reviews

[keith]

well written well said well done
blown the dust off once again with sharing

[Cassie Fraga]

ooooohhhh.... love the free verse fah real!!! that was an awesome read!!! **tips my lyrical wand to you**

[Muse]

To drink another person's soul is as intimate as it gets. Your freestyle poem makes me thirst for a cup. You write with wit, charm, and heart. Thank you for sharing.

[Michael X]

wow, this poem is all about give and take, it is the moment.

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one lump or two...or am I just stirring things up? LOL ;)

splendid job