A Poet's World

my first true a tempt at a couplets daydream..

@ lavender flowers I wash up on site
  so friendly and open and welcome all write

like ginger and thyme I tumble thru holes
  with Violets and Jezebels and even a Coyote

to a Sweet n Tender Hooligan bar
  in this wonderland where trees stretch and Goes Rawr

such a mystical pageway to find a Creativecat
  who Rocked Out on Adrenaline and fancied a Scaggs scat 

meet The Perfect Stranger who Blossomed Dovetails
  named Okie Wan Kenokie she stared like Kiri Nells

an abandoned V W Poetess spoke
  about Jayde Skies and so Simple_Me wrote

A Poetic Symphony played Across The Universe
  the Ghost in the Shell of Siddhartha's Place of Berth

Mayaway my lines deep insidE A Field'er
  beside a BlueEyedBandit and a Daughter of Evil  

I gathered my thoughts and considered my travels
  from A Child Young and Quite to this Aurora B.alice

like an S in stone with vines over grown
 I feel I have found Sethnicity's home

such a lush company to release my vowels
 like hot tubing with friends while bubbling something foul

exploring my boundaries and wafting my lyrics
 so the Ian my mind can be coupled with kindred spirits
:)

Author's Note

I feel a bit lame cause the obvious gimmick
I respect everyone here if you don't like it feel free to tear it
apart from the theme the original got deleted
while working and writing some keys straight up depleted
so the only think left for me to do was rebuild
with the best names on the blocks of my Poetry Crew!
Love you guys...

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

this is one gem that catches and pulls the attention deeper requiring complete concentration to detail due to all the wonderland roots and sky high blossoms that tear themselves wide open through a composite of alludes that if missed would oh so be missed~ oh hot damn~ at scat you had this cat~ meow!~

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice list of writers and Poets. I like the Writer's cafe. I was given a kind welcome also. Good to know you. Poetry and words need to be shared and spread. Maybe we can give hope to one person.
Coyote

[Rene Velez]

it is an enjoyable write, every writer is unique in their approach to a piece, but the sum of all it's parts works well together, great images...

[.]

and couplets you shall have..with all the WC charmers rolling down the hill together - loved it.

[Zoe Jay]

haha, this is very charming, I love it!! :)

[Kiri Nells]

I feel honored that you would include me among such great poets in this wonderful piece! Nice write!

[just rose.]

rockin couplets

[Ruth]

Tear apart? Kidding right? lol
Hon...I love this! Beautifully conveyed and the imagery detailed is breathtaking..the structure is divine and allows the reader to take it all on board...
I would say this is rather sublime! :)
xx