Am I Daydreaming?

So when should I stop?
I thought Love was all I needed
She says I Love You
As she's leaving
Her Friends My Foes are sleeping
and I'm laid awake Daydreaming

Reviews

[Kristallo]

I love this, Seth. I hope your daydreams in blue don't disappear at the wake of a lash- but come true! You are a sublime and compassionate soul whom shines the brightest when you have someone to share that spark grandeur with you. And thoughts of you always warm my heart when my mind traverses time and space to dote on cherished thoughts of you, my dearest friend. Whoever you love, I hope they return it in full force, because any object of such genuine and creative object of yours is a lucky woman, indeed!

Only one thought here: it might enhance the fifth line if you added commas between (my friends, my foes, are sleeping) but if you left them out purposely i'm sure you had done it intentionally and with good reason. Sending you hugs across state lines! 100/100

Krys

[Kristallo]

Note; sorry about the frequent typos, should have re-read that before posting! :P

[Sethnicity]

Thank You! :`)

[Muse]

Daydreaming.......if I could, I would stay daydreaming 7 days a week! For you my friend.... it seems to induce both heart break and paralysis. You are caught inbetween reality and denial.

[Sethnicity]

You are So right on! I hate this purgatory of the heart! I'm waiting for that perfect soul to come and wake me up....