Love Drain

I Love You like Rain to Surface
I fall with purpose to soak in Your surplus
I high rise against Your Mountains and wet Your grassy Valleys
You're the center of My Force from which My revolution shall rally
I dilate in Your Atmosphere and precipitate in Your Fertile Crescent
I'm riding the current of Your emotion to cool off your Cape and Horn
I in You and above it when Your sad souls cry I pour through them to puppet
their motions as omens they are holograms of Our notions 
they move and meddle moving Our bits around where they settle
when We change our minds these feeble ideas return to Our middle
Not quite a marriage some say mysterious
the seven sides of You and Me
but in my belly I carry Sperm Whales and Hermits and Sea
the swollen members of loves winter and a bed to lay Our head
as You satallete through solar wind to excite Me
and We rise in Misty Gravity
My thoughts gather to Cloud cover Your spots
My thought like Love drain over Thee.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you used the language. Allowing the reader to fall into powerful statements.
"I'm riding the current of Your emotion to cool off your Cape and Horn"
Strong emotion led me on a very good ride in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

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wow ..what a delicious journey your mind takes us on..I am captivated..

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I am sorry I can find no words other than fabulous.So much to take in!
Your poetry has much intelligence within it .. wonderfully sensual piece~

Chloe