The American Choir

External Observations

The American Choir
With feet stuck in the Muck and Mire
A herd of moths drawn to the Fire
Minds fried by tube with cable wire
to confused to see the real liar
Chewing chicken fat distracted by this and that
Overweight and Fatisfied
Wanting Change Wanting Chains
Wasting Brains  in Varicose Veins
on creams and Ways to Maintain
This    Flesh     Frame
Liquid Thoughts           Pastel Cots
Speckled Mops       Busted Locks
Broken Bars          Rusted Cars
Super Stars Childhood Unpar
Void     Destroyed
Convoy Bell Boy
Kill Joy
Unwanted
Unloved
Understood


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Reviews

[Rene Velez]

cool wordplay, the demise of the american social structure, cool

[Kyla H]

This has an amazing feeling to it, well done.

[SpokenWord]

It's a wonder how America survived all this time. Ah yes technology I wonder what will happen when the technological era ends. People don't see that coming but it is. Wonder view into America without the distraction of the news casters to sugar coat it.

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lyrical genius

[Robin]

that is cool ~