All Hearts Attack

a woodland waltz composed of meter and passion best enjoyed with Red Hot Chili peppers and Elliot Smith at evening round Seven...

I am the hunted
A B*****d of Love
One day I'm Vivid
the next I'm livid w/ Fog

Wind Blows Me like ringing or tapping the Window
Spreading my scent as I went for the Doe
Unfurling on decent a Swirling my ear
Blood Curling Heart Whirling at Demons eye Stare...

No guessing No blessing these Vixens prepare
All Beasting fore Feasting I'm Preying four Hast
Come quickly Come gently Come Clawing with Grace
One Tempting One limping metallic's the taste.

Their appetite is Lusting awaiting my space
They’re shady, I'm hasty, WHY make me thyne date?
You know me You owe me the Pleasure to wait.

They'll Kill me Quite harshly if I acquiesce, so
No Screeching Now Reaching My Blood Trail they trust

I shiver I quiver my Heart Breaks to run
F'in Hate or in Love I'm turning the Gun

I'm burning the forest the trail goes untracked
when hearts stop I'm unlocked there's no turning  back

Universally   Speaking
                                    
All
       Hearts     
                   Attack!

Reviews

[emmajoy]

We could dance to this poem .. we could swing our stuff for hours on end. Plus, it's near unique, certainly individual.

''They'll Kill me Quite harshly if I acquiesce ~ No Screeching Now Reaching My Blood Trail they lust.. ' .. .. read it twice and hear it!

[Sethnicity]

Oh Emma! How I wish I could dance as well as I write... Miss you I Will stop by soon.

[ghost writer]

Like a hunter on full charge, you bound across the page with insatiable delight..there is a control in the words..as if you are tempting the reader to play..a clever and enjoyable read

[Rene Velez]

I am enlightened, the depth and cadence are worldly, great writing my friend..

[Kenneth The Poet]

Powerful stuff!

[Cassie Fraga]

wwoooooowww!!! love the sound to this... love how it gripped me from the start and kept me on edge the whole way through... love how the end packs it with a punch!!! I LOVE THIS PIECE!! thank you for sharing.... very talented in your ways!!
**tips my lyrical wand to you**

[Kat Sayers]

Wow, that had my heart racing by the end. A simmer felt by the hands of a stranger. Nothing better than a smooth quill!

[.]

you always like my heart skip a methorical beat!! Your meter makes reading your work a pleasure..as the words trip hop off the tongue and all the while your mind is wired to another uni verse..

[Ivory]

Wow... So much emotion in your words..
Very deep, yet poetic.. I look forward to reading more of your work : )

[roarke]

Well I'm no poet, but I am a musician, and this is one hell of a romp through the changes. An improvisation worthy of Stan Getz or Eddie Lock-jaw Davis, or Dexter Gordon. Let that heart run free man.

[OT]

ha I love the rap-feel to all of your works - you just exude "spoken word" and I can imagine this on a stage - all passionate and fiery - if you haven't done any performances you need to! this is the sort of thing that should be on stage - a poetic intuitiveness - you have a natural rhythm that pulses through the page - nice!