Heaven and Earth

a poem to love one another... True Love Waits Between Truth written on slates Pretty Brittle plates Peanut brittle Cakes Cinnamon toffee Flakes

I am the field and stream
                                    Feathers of hemp and Evergreens
You are the Aire and Glare of Sun and Moon
                        Shimmering hue
Every breath is Breeze
                      Between my Leaves
In my hair you Grease
     The Life you give
  I          inhALE              SQUEeze
I expel color and seed on my belly
           You soak it up by day
and Lick it by night                           
 Leaving Morning Dew all over Me and You from my Mountain Top

View, Your Heavenly Body

                         the Phoenix Treasure
24 points to renew
                          not even kinda blue
I post pictures of you in My space
  Too hot to hold
in my conSciences states

                             U & I behold  each other

and you lead the Movement
                                      Like Milk makes its Way

U n I Verse  the Chorus of our

inner cort'us

Author's Note

ex: ignore grammar...
it's intentional... ;)

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

that only one person has reviewed this (and I know she is a feeler and a speaker of her truth sister) tells me that your beauty is just a little too intense for some of those who travel here! If 55 folks checked it out! You speak from a place of inner calm, and with a compelling voice. I particularly like the way you weave between metaphorical reality and factual daily event kind of reality. Perfectly depicts your title by sampling both heaven and earth and folded together quite neatly into one seamless flowing work. very nice.

[Brad]

wow, bro, your use of descriptives drown your reader with the raw emotion of this peice....bravo

[Sethnicity]

very good point.... 2 man E spilling air rows... :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

tactile erotica through the sensual composition and curves of a deeply rooted poet's mind~ alluring and satin~ a cosmic trip through the sensual side of mystique~

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how did this slip through the net..a gentle sway of metaphoric pleasure..held together in slow deep and meaningful rhythm..bravo.

[Dark Beauty]

Great imagery in your words to convey the message in this piece, Excellent write, loved it!!