Cloaks

Burying the past Wearing Cloaks of Innocence

Leaves a trail of Dirt

Leaves a trail of Dirt

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Typically I don't like a single haiku/senryu becuz it never feels "complete" . . . I want more. But you have definitely captured the essence of the short poetic forms -- this conveys a TON & it also conveys a complete & thought-provoking statement. I've always been the type of person to just leave, after some major breach in a friendship. Some things always leave a trail of dirt that plagues a friendship continually afterwards! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Sethnicity]

I spent two years writing haiku form daily and trust me it's really a task to write a decent haiku much less something goo dor even deep. SO, your examination is greatly appreciated. The art is an active form of Zen meditation when done right.. but like nirvana rarely achieved.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Hiding true face from self. A foolish effort. Wise words shared my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sethnicity]

Thanks you Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.