Promise to the Skye (Vows)

Eyes made a Promise to the Skye
much like Rainbows seen on high
through the celestial vastness nigh
wound in her viridian eye

To be held in reciprocity
supernatural laws binding we
while embracing our humanity
hand in hand we strengthen we

Eyes made a Promise to the Skye
To see thru our redemption, ride
though cloud cover storm or shine
lightning striking I'll stay with thee


Eyes made a Promise to the Skye
To take and make the rules apply
side by side forever to abide
steadfast with you before I  
never not weather vexed or vehment 
is the subject of our verb agreement

Eyes may not behold forever
but heart and soul entwined together
So that our forever may be 
as a day in eternity

Welkin wonder of Gods promise to me
Selah for my for dolcina

Author's Note

Photo Credit: painting by Skye Taylor

Reviews

[Lorry]

Beautifully captured words that carve meaning into our hearts. Congratulations on finding the one that brings these thoughts and words to your mind. This one caught my eye because I have just recently been to the Isle of Skye in the Scottish isles, which is a beautiful place to be, even on a cold April day.

[Sethnicity]

Thank you and many blessings to you.

[emmajoy]

Such beautiful words, full of loving commitment and what's more, musical start to finish...

Wishing you and your new missus a marriage full of lifelong harmony. Meantime, happy everything now and into the new year.

[Sethnicity]

Thank you for your many blessings!

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Seth, this is original, but more, deeply You, making the vows worth more in their meaning to your love. Sincere and Very touching!

[Sethnicity]

Thank you, definitely from the heart!

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the thoughts and the journey you took me with.
"Eyes may not behold forever
but heart and soul entwined together
So that our forever may be
as a day in eternity"
The above were my favorite. I liked the possibilities of two people entwined in hope and dream. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sethnicity]

Glad you enjoyed. These were my actual wedding vows I spoke over this past summer.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful vow my friend and graduation on your marriage.