Won by One

A Poem by Sethnicity

Future Haiku

Equality Writes

Our Small Steps Won by Won Breath

Equality Rights.

© 2013 Sethnicity

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Poetic Justice

Perfection comes in small packages sometimes. Less is more so to speak . loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ShelleyA

Clever word play; thought provoking. A well crafted Senryu of 17 syllables or less. Excellent use of contrast. Well penned and a good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

thanks.. it was a well timed Idea when US was making the push for marriage equality. :)

Riley Bray

I've never been a good haiku writer myself, but this is a quality haiku! I really like it, and its an interesting way of putting it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

Nice Haiku of you. Yeah, equality rights...

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

Nice use of the short statements. You made your point. Last real freedom we must protect. Freedom to write and think. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks Yote!

Poetic Beauty

I love the play on words in this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

I just love to play with words! :)

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Added on April 9, 2013
Last Updated on May 15, 2013
Tags: Sethnicity, Haiku, Progress, Change, Enlightenment, Think Different

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Sethnicity

Just In, TX

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