Cream Nicotine

No Surprise, next time Try a little tenderness... Fugazi & Otis Redding At least that is what was going through my head while writing.

She is My cream nicotine

The

Surging through our blues

The fluidity of divinity

Juxtapose

Whoever said love was easy…

Yeah 'Ol Chap, they Sure had it right,

Because no man or lady can ever Subtract

Once their hue has mixed it can never go back.

2 Whipped Cream and Other Delights.

And why would you?

The dregs are bitter,

The milk too sweet.

If you water it down then

All flavor retreats

Life is just better off Bitter-Sweet,

Cream never asks coffee

On how it should mix

Why do we attempt these liquid alchemy tricks?

The intrusion is dilution of the Makers choice

Through imperfection comes the lesson

Learned perception with each sip

The air red dried truth

The

Words stuck to the lips

Tasters Digest the last drink drips

Yet I question why I am so subject

to infusion

Her meaningful quips

Why we attempt these liquid alchemy tricks?

Still I question why I am so subject

to the infusion of Her

Dips

Sometimes I call it Love

Sometimes I call it Quits

For You My Dear

Let's Cheers Another Grip

of

Seared Buds and Belly Aches

So

Pour Another! while the Argument still in Air

and 

While Dilutions of gratification Grind into Frothy Despair

and

My C**k and mOthballs Crow in the Cupboard.

Author's Note

I already got my Ass chewed out once... so why not again.
Recently Edited to Taste.

Reviews

[Zackery Alan Daley]

This is my favorite piece since Selene left the website. Astonishingly well written, but with slang. Which is in my opinion the most beautiful way to write is to have pre conceived thought processes that the reader must decipher for themselves. Very impressed here.

[Sethnicity]

Thank You So Much Zack! When it rains it pours... and my heart bled this one for sure.

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

"If you water it down then
All flavor retreats"; "Why do we attempt these liquid alchemy tricks?"
brilliance...lots of amazing metaphors going on here...you created a nice apex in the middle and I love the ending...you could cry or laugh at the end...you have the kind of tragedy/comedy thing happening..I think a guy could relate to the ending differently than a woman, but either could appreciate this piece just fine, if they have any sense

well done, sir

[Sethnicity]

Thanks Man I really Appreciate your attention and thoughts!

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

you're most welcome. I read a couple your newer work too, but I'm gonna swing by and re-read...how did your poetry reading go?

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

Krys mentioned it and I asked if you were reading..I go to them as well, hence why I'm wondering
read moreKrys mentioned it and I asked if you were reading..I go to them as well, hence why I'm wondering

[Sethnicity]

We went but it was too late for us to perform.

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

is it monthly?

[Sethnicity]

Yeah. But our town is exploding with writing circles so there are different things happening every week if not more!

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

explosions are always fun

[Sethnicity]

BAM!
:)

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

;)

[Poetic Justice]

OH MY GOSH!! I am flabbergasted at your mastery..clever, witty, sharp, dry and fabulous..I have been absent..but you make the return all the more sweet... x

[Sethnicity]

Thanks PJ! I wouldn't quite say "Mastery" more like hindsight in an emotional mirror of a current reality. two is my lucky number so I think I might get it right this time around... Hope you are doing well still missed hearing from you. wasn't sure if you'd be back! I guess I should check for your new winter inspirations!

[Poetic Justice]

I would say mastery.!! Don't argue!! LOL
I always come back..

[Sethnicity]

:D

[Cherrie Palmer]

Aw, the quill doth bite when then our muse takes our words to heart ;) nicely penned.
ps great flow of thought and image

[Sethnicity]

Thank You very much!