Cream Nicotine

No Surprise, next time Try a little tenderness... Fugazi & Otis Redding At least that is what was going through my head while writing.

She is My cream nicotine

The

Surging through our blues

The fluidity of divinity

Juxtapose

Whoever said love was easy…

Yeah 'Ol Chap, they Sure had it right,

Because no man or lady can ever Subtract

Once their hue has mixed it can never go back.

2 Whipped Cream and Other Delights.

And why would you?

The dregs are bitter,

The milk too sweet.

If you water it down then

All flavor retreats

Life is just better off Bitter-Sweet,

Cream never asks coffee

On how it should mix

Why do we attempt these liquid alchemy tricks?

The intrusion is dilution of the Makers choice

Through imperfection comes the lesson

Learned perception with each sip

The air red dried truth

The

Words stuck to the lips

Tasters Digest the last drink drips

Yet I question why I am so subject

to infusion

Her meaningful quips

Why we attempt these liquid alchemy tricks?

Still I question why I am so subject

to the infusion of Her

Dips

Sometimes I call it Love

Sometimes I call it Quits

For You My Dear

Let's Cheers Another Grip

of

Seared Buds and Belly Aches

So

Pour Another! while the Argument still in Air

and 

While Dilutions of gratification Grind into Frothy Despair

and

My C**k and mOthballs Crow in the Cupboard.

Author's Note

I already got my Ass chewed out once... so why not again.
Recently Edited to Taste.

Reviews

[Zackery Alan Daley]

This is my favorite piece since Selene left the website. Astonishingly well written, but with slang. Which is in my opinion the most beautiful way to write is to have pre conceived thought processes that the reader must decipher for themselves. Very impressed here.

[Sethnicity]

Thank You So Much Zack! When it rains it pours... and my heart bled this one for sure.

[Graysin Angel]

You have actually mastered one of the nonstandard poetry styles. I have found few others who even come close.

[Sethnicity]

Well, Thank You, I'm sure all poets love to be told they are tapping new territory but to be told you are mastering something is a regard rarely bestowed. I would have to say that I am always pushing myself to experiment and find the most personally gratifying schemes and scaffolding to hang my thoughts and lyrics on. Honestly I am not sure which style you would be referring too but I am always open to enlightenment. Thanks Again!

[Ruth]

Ah, always surreal and a buzz lol I love your work...leaves me with more questions than answers ♥

[Sethnicity]

You should really appreciate it when you apply an English tone...

[Angi]

Ha! That last line, Seth! Ha! Just remember, the making up really does make up for it all. Nicely done, man! Angi~

[Petra Vlah]

"Through imperfection comes the lesson" is my favorite line.
Perfection is boring, isn't it? Actually, perfection (if ever reached), is closing the precious door of trying to elevate the spirit

[Samuel Jack]

So vivid and energetic! A real roller coaster of a relationship by the sound of it. Love the last line, you have your priorities in order sir. I don't have a favourite bit because it was all awesome. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

[Sethnicity]

Well Thank You Samuel Jack! and I'll do the same for you. Me and the Goddess don't have rocky parts just moments of Riptides and Cross winds but it all blends perfectly in cacophony. :)

[EMMIE]

Now this is poetic justice lol! Probably one of the best ones I've read in a while on this site. The imagery, the flow, the rhythm...it is all there. Unique concept too. I'm a fan!

[Sethnicity]

And I'm blown away! Thank You for drinking my artistry!

[realmwriter]

This is certainly something different than what I have read of yours in the past.
Very nice job. Your use of metaphors and hyperbole is spot on to say the least.

[Sethnicity]

Once again Thank yOufor the positive review.
Much Love

[realmwriter]

Your most welcome

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Always like reading your work and the imagery created in my mind's eye. Excellent read and write.

[Sethnicity]

Thanks So much Brandon! I pour out my thoughts onto paper cups at my rendezvous reserve bar where all can come and drink under the morning star.

[Frieda P]

Ha last line is a killer, you blew my skirt up with this one Sethnicity! Abstract, erotic and wild abandon all in one lusty bite.

Cream never asks coffee
On how it should mix
Why do we attempt these liquid alchemy tricks?

You slayed me here, yes, why?

[Sethnicity]

Because it's Sooooul Delicious! THanks! :D

[Frieda P]

Morning, noon or night, oh yeah.