White Light Water Falls (Whytie lie tit bowling)

Visually stimulated, Beat sequence motivated. Photo Credit: RongRong & Inri

White light blowing away my black stains Pure in sight through window pains

Why tie lie tit bowling A sway Black reigns Pull in spite blue wind blow chains

 

Sorrows woven from my brains share this pleasure between fabric reins

 Saw row dove in foam pie stains stare his leisure bee twin faux brick dames

 

Lines that line our manes white sheets draping, like water falls, breaking

Lies tat lie wow stains high streets raking like father calls, waking

 

Breath taking  with all this clarity my ties remain unshaken

Death shaking width gall diss charity may skys carry me disdain forsaken

 

While the white washed world beams me down vacant.

Bile the sight sauced swirled dreams key drown complacent 

 

 

(Tell Me which side of the mirror suits you )

 

 

White light blowing away my black stains Pure insight through window pains

Why tie lie tit bowling, A sway Black reigns Pull in spite blue wind blow chains

 

Sorrows woven from my brains share this pleasure between fabric rains

 Saw row dove in foam pie stains stare his pleasure bee twin faux brick dames

 

Lines that line our manes white sheets draping, like water falls, breaking

Lies tat lie wow stains high streets raking like father calls, waking

 

Breath taking with all this clarity my ties remain unshaken

Sleep shaking width gall diss charity may skys carry me disdain forsaken

 

While the white washed world beams me down vacant.

Smile the sight sauced swirled dreams key drown complacent 

Author's Note

This poem is far beyond what most can grasp, It is meant to be read and read again and read again in a different way.... I'm attempting to create 3 dimensional poetry via a two dimensional medium. So when I say "Read every other line then read every other line then mix mash it like MPC." You can literally start any where in this poem and and while reading the top line insert a line from below it it's like hymnal music where you can see how verse one and verse two syllabication are identical and even the top version is different from the bottom! It's like a Rubik's cube ! :D

Reviews

[rnuff]

WOW, This is so intriguing and deep. Love the emotions put into this write. Very well written and flow so well. Love the rhyme scheme.

[Frieda P]

What? It's too early for me to wrap my head around this one....it's piqued my interest though and I need to get back to it, after several more cups of coffee! ;-)

[Sethnicity]

Thanks Frieda... You are a really brave one. Most see this and go running! :D The melody and meaning is found like noodling on a guitar. Like a drum machine with a thousand samples laid out in front of you... when you eventually build courage to conquer it... again; I would love to hear about where it took you and the varied meanings and moments you discovered through it.
or if you find it to be garbage thats fine too. :)

[Frieda P]

Me thinks it might take more than a few cuppas to figure this one out, since the only 'noodles' I know are in the kitchen it may take me a while. Will back to you on this one! ;-)