Too Long Tea

sipping and venting.

I don't know where to start... I feel plane 
infinite points traced around my brain.
Many ticks prick injustice migraines
Right now I wanna vent on hot air blimps 
self proclaimed pimps 
till my tongue twists limp
or turn a loaded gun on immature mutual funds 
my grain is rough 
and I've grown bitter an tough 
my mind metal is scuffed 
I Dizzied my Gills be cheeks blowin up guts 
what happened to the wonderful world
musta been the Tea.. now I'm Ralphing up Chucks
high society 
in memory 
it used to be 
where I wanted to be
Visa Via
English living was the life for me
guess I'd traded up for some Hot S**t reaL-It-Tea
I think I've had enough 
guess I stuffed and over fluffed
had too much empty v (MTV)
sipping on that 4 twin Tea
Now I gotta V!

I vibrate so viciously 
I violate all variations of conform Ahh!, Tea
Been too long slipping on and spilt ma Chi

I'm tired of
The warnings the warming the tide turning the swarming
Killer bees  Wu is me 
for I've been sipping on Boo Blue Tea

I lost my voice yet still voting 
while Hippy flippies are still steady chat hosting
I'm Roasting poli-sci-fi-ers who can't find a town square 
but got bags of opinions on world politics here and there
face-booking without a book in their face
fighting freedom by being dumb ignoring the truth such a disgrace
soldiers fighting harder at home to make it a home 
feeling lost and alone their kids barely even grown 
ready to start living 
thought he was done with the killing
till he saw a villain on his throne life lost all appealing
come to find out that his wife had done gone
so settled on hanging strange fruit to shadow shalom
While 
I'm so far out of the zone 
that I get these messages on my cellular phone
Reality Strike Domes like killer bees Wu is me
I'm miles away sipping on Too Long Tea

Yet homeless happy people without thrive ability
party pushers posting pictures with such  jive hostility
acting out with rational it's like sporting politically
Obama's on my starting team with poll pushing agility 
I Got two Clintons on my backup fantasy league
don't watch local games or who's selling off senate seats
not all are frozen but most have chosen illiterately 
on the block taking tokens steady smokin and broken  
no matter for realities that are steadily approaching
call me young in notion but I can't stand for lack of motion
late nights to early mornings I'm writing in search of potion
like Juliet rests in pieces I see the gauntlets broken
YOU can't save the planet DAMN IT so Janet pass on posting 
Nothin new under sun we kill for fun and Whales s**t in the ocean 
as if Ape won't kill Ape Mother Earth will keep her motion 
Wu is Me now I see I've been 
Sipping on Too Wrongs Lefty

I hope you know I care 
but start by loving your neighbor there and their and they're 
reciprocate the truth and stand aloof of those who dare
put money before truth 
visage before root
facsimile before proof
save the sympathy for devils 
or get the f**k out my booth

Check the numbers 
Global hunger 
riches blundered
voice down under
jobless convicts
bodies ditch in
Wars we pitched in

I'm talking about true world vision

social image
tweeting pigeons 
Madolf mongrels
hate crime heroes
Welfare wealthy 
advertising gimmicks
famous like dirty limericks 
IMF, what a concept
acceptable debit?
nuclear threats
hating one another for what we choose to worship!?
It's already on our doorstep...
... yet we get hung up on the stupid 
"Ooh! Ahh!" "Green" Part Tea Bullshit!
Clinging to our jobs not because we like what we do 
but we feel we have too!
Some parts of the world unite for things 
other than Death and Dollars Popularity and Power!
... now look at US!
I'm just A fish on a diet of Super fishy all lit Tea


 


 

Author's Note

I'll change my status I'm dating Debbie Downer
at least I know what she's down for... Do you really need another metaphor?
Quit Sipping, cus Supper is Served!

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

I like this a lot, a critical, compassionate look at your own country. But just a small word from a European - the United States has still a lot to be proud of, so don`t be too negative. Most people in the world would be happy to be able to live in the United States !

[Sethnicity]

Thanks Philibert... I do understand that, and I do Love my Country... and those who stood up to half truths that were made self-evident that "all men were created equal"... unless they were Black, Poor, Gay, or Ignorant. When I come down hard like this is beacuse there is still change that needs to be embraced and the only way to bring it to surface is through Blood, Sweat, and Suffering. So we struggle and speak out, sometimes quite rashly. I also understand that the whole world is watching and when I see videos of Africans dancing to American Rap songs that Glorify the Dollar and Female defamation it makes me sick... So when I refer to tea I'm speaking of anyone and everyone who partakes in the anti-productivi-tea of the human condition. I mean I can be positive too.. but to do so seems like a great injustice to the vast changes that need to happen in this world. But thank you SO much for your reviews I really enjoy getting feedback. and even more a challenge!

[Sethnicity]

So What do you think about US now Philibert... Seems that I should be writing for the next tea party.

[Muse]

Sarcasm...luv it! On a more serious note, I too feel unsettled by all of this. To think..some of us are gullible enough to buy into this gross cup of tea. Insightful penning full of wisdom and maturity.

[Coyote Poetry]

I worry for all people. The President had limited power. We re-elected most of the House and Senate. They voted 41 bills into law. lowest since WW2. They gave themselves a pay raise with 16 trillion dollar debt/Didn't pass a budget in four years. The House get 1.2 billion to eat and live. 2.3 million per rep. We must be crazy. My workers can't afford the gas to get to work. Most don't eat lunch. Your poem open the door to many thoughts. I pray for wisdom. Old wise grandpa saying. "Don't try to repair another house when your house is in need and falling apart." Keep the Soldier in the USA and no more free money to any other country except for food, water and medicine. We must have a balance budget to survive.
Coyote
Coyote

[Sethnicity]

We need more than just a Balanced Budget... We need Level headed leaders and to do away with two party special interest groups... I also believe allowing Big Corp or any cooperation to be considered as a human entity is complete absurd and a disregard to logic. A Company can sway the vote collecting endless funds and not pay taxes in Its “birth country”... has human rights but never needs to eat, die, or care about shelter and transportation?
There are so many inconsistencies in our countries logic that it's gonna take people completely abandoning party lines and these ridiculous polices that cling to ideals and beliefs that perpetuate the problem. I mean I don’t know where to start or stop on the issues…, That’s why I wrote this poem. It’s like I’m ready to kick back and pour my last cup of hater aid and welcome the apocalypse with the amount of s**t that needs to be weighted through to get back on a progressive positive yet rooted in understanding and past mistake ridden history!

[Poetic Justice]

Oh my Goodness! Reality bites and hard..your rhythm hangs tightly to the revolution and anger within the lines..I felt every emotion seeping through the words..truly inspiration writing..spot on with your observations..one of your best!

[Sethnicity]

Thank You P! I had to Blow off the Steam if you know what I mean.... :)
I might be putting this one into music format will let you listen if so okay?
How are you?