Bajanga

Bajanga

A Poem by Sethnicity
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B-lankets and pillows never felt better
              no matter what surface wearing you + me sweaters
A-ll night under street lights after working so hard
           comfort squeezed tight between red and white cars
J-umping from tree trunks to bounce on my balcony
             or tripping through doorways lamenting your exiting
A-bsolving my Queen of hearts choking in barren land
           between seats, belts, and borders holding your hand
N-estled in bed two children and Halo on your head 
              lips of flames lost and found ignoring what was said
G-iving Forgiveness for Arrhythmia of Heart
            remembering the beginning  going back to the start
A-ccepting that no matter how far apart
           We are the creators of each others art.
          


 

© 2012 Sethnicity


Author's Note

Sethnicity
Until the very end of me,
Until the very end of you.

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This is beyond exceptional! It's so refreshingly different than anything else I've read. You speak as an urban mystic I think! I see the action of your listing as a sort of dance blended with a lot of really vivid red imagery: hearts (the card suit), the heart, the car, lips, flames... it's ablaze! This was more than a read, it was a visual experience of the highest caliber and a spiritual journey. Thank you for sharing this excellent piece of literature!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is beyond exceptional! It's so refreshingly different than anything else I've read. You speak as an urban mystic I think! I see the action of your listing as a sort of dance blended with a lot of really vivid red imagery: hearts (the card suit), the heart, the car, lips, flames... it's ablaze! This was more than a read, it was a visual experience of the highest caliber and a spiritual journey. Thank you for sharing this excellent piece of literature!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

B-arnes and Noble- where I met you 8 years ago.
A-phex Twin- We listened to window licker when we rode bikes to the mall.
J-une- 2008, I moved to Denton with you... or was it July? :P
A-drift and at Peace- the song we listened to when we got high in my bedroom
N- ine inch nails- we saw them twice!
G-reek mythology- and existentialism, we often talked philosophy and ancient worlds.
A-short time, in the great scheme of life, but wonderful nonetheless.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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