No Longer

sequel to 'Alone'

I am not alone.

I no longer see

through the eyes of a child,

nor do I hear the words

being said.

The voices around me

are precious and true,

and the sights that I see

are magnificent till the end.

The only thing changed

is the man with the charming grin.

Instead of him when I answer the door

it is a vast reflection of me

coming in.

No longer am i alone.

Nor have i ever been.

Reviews

[..R.I.P..]

Way to say "let love in". I thought this piece was well written.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Very sweetly written piece about leaving behind child hood things. Well written.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love changes everything and can turn world around, a sweet little piece of writing.

[deeps]

I like this, it has emotion that tugs.
Well written and enjoyable read.

[Marlena]

Nice flow :) Sweet,
"The only thing changed
is the man with the charming grin.
Instead of him when I answer the door
it is a vast reflection of me
coming in."