Alone

I am alone.

I have no pillows

to rest my head.

Nowhere to lay

in a soft bed.

I have no parents,

no father and mother.

I have no siblings,

a sister and brother.

And then I hear it,

a knock at the door.

I getup to answer

what I am no more.

I see a man

with a charming grin,

silently asking

to be let in.

With looks to kill

like a romancer,

i blandly look

and tell him my answer.

I am alone

Reviews

[Drifter]

Hmm, this almost makes me think of a nursery rhyme which can be interpreted as a good thing. To be honest though, it left me wanting more. More what? I don't know. It feels like this poem can offer a deeper richness. That's not to say I don't like it or that it isn't good. Just saying I felt like more could be said.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Very well written and a great piece. The flow was amazing.

[deeps]

Well said and written.
Flat rate emotions said from your heart.
You have talent, like your words you craft.