Acid.

Acid.

A Poem by Surreal Sabrina

Vegetable and bread medley from Subway drowning in a diluted acidic version of Absolute zero Monster stares back at me from its pretty porcelain tomb. 

Blue hues and green roughage floating in a watery grave, no longer belonging to my metabolic pathway besides the sour taste of my defeat. 

Images of chopped swine dance in my head as I secure myself to the cool tile floor. 

I promised I would never do this again. 



© 2011 Surreal Sabrina


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This made me chuckle. It reminds me of the first time I took mushrooms. My friend and I went to Burger King, but when I got my burger, I couldn't eat it- everything disgusting about seemed accentuated ten-thousand-fold. Anyway, thanks for the memories.
By the way, was this inspired by an actual acid trip?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, that is amazing how you describe such simple things!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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The images set a sharp mood, especially in your
brutally creative use of description. It's awesome!!!


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I write not because I want to, not because I need to, not because it is my life, not to impress, not to express myself, not to prove to you that I can, I write because it comes out. more..

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