A new place

I walk along the empty road.

Nothing ahead, and nothing behind. 

I'm lost on an empty road in the middle of nowhere.

I watch as the sun rises another day.

The light is bright on the morning of May.

To my heart's content, it's not the sun i see,

but the gates of heaven near the sea.

I look through the bars and only see him.

My savior,

 My messiah

He says my name 'Kim".

A voice so gentle and sweet.

While he looks so neat.

I fall to my knees.

I never knew him true,

yet here he was with the keys.

He carries my heart and I'm in heaven.

A heaven spent with my God, for eternity.

 

Author's Note

please ignore any errors. Thank you.

Reviews

[crow]

good,but generic

[Alya Usman]

Nice. Love it. It's great. ^^ Keep writing.

[Marilu Elizabeth]

lovely this is defiantly a favorite now...

~*MariluLUVSJo*~

[Ezrael]

Lovely romantic air--almost like a dream.

[MadasonBlue]

This is very good.

[shythatway]

This was beautiful and hopeful, and I think this was my favourite part: "He carries my heart and I'm in heaven." Well done. =)

[Melissa Kesead]

Great piece!

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!!
What A Most Remarkable Piece Indeed !!!
Just Beautiful !!!
A Great Well Written Marvel For Sure !!!

[Vincent A. Beasley]

I love how you make it so simple but yet so complex at the same time. It's no problem for you to easily paint upon the canvas of my mind x)