Here with You

Hold me close and say I'm right;
To me you are my shining light.
Make me feel like I belong
Let me know this isn't wrong.
Show your love and make it known
Maybe here, with you, is home.

Reviews

[R. Nella]

I like these short rhymes. They are a simple but effective form of poetry, and convey meaning well.

I like the way you describe a sense of belonging in the final line... "Maybe here, with you, is home."